Brightened night,
Darkened figures of no blind sight
Seeking victims in their bleak respite
Like hunting lambs to eat in sight
Of Statue Mothers by mortal fright -
That sunlit burning brightened night.
Mother Nature, come aid our sad tense lives
And rinse the salt from our darkened eyes.
Where some they live,
Where everybody dies.
A.J Buttle, Unknown
What the fuck am I on about? Pretentious prick. Hm! That's told me!
What the fuck am I on about? Pretentious prick. Hm! That's told me!
4 comments:
"Everybody lives,
"Everybody dies"
Yes, this is true; HOWEVER, who will enter the kingdom of Heaven and who will be thrown into the fiery pits of hell? (King James Bible)
You title this poem with a question mark "Christians?"
Delve deeper dear and the answers will come.
Nice to see you changed the heading. Well done. I believe you are the seeker of the truth. The bible says, "Seek and ye shall find." I am impressed with your humbleness, and desire to seek and learn. This writing shows your frustration, and anger in your search. I can understand that frustration, and anger, for, I, too once felt the same way.
I do not know what truths will finally make your heart rest with peace; however, looking back over your other poems and proses, I believe, and feel you will/would make a great Christian; perhaps even a wonderful mentor for the younger generation.
I am looking forward to reading your findings. Wishing you great wisdom as you continue to delve deeper.
-Same author as above
Thank you "Anonymous". Your comments are very interesting. apologies for the length of time it took to reply
Dear AJButtle
You say my comments are"interesting". The word "interesting" can cover a wide arena of theory, thought, opinions, facts, and leaves me with cause to lean my chin into my upturned palm to rumminate on what makes your brain tick.
Very intriguing man you are. Your poems are brilliant; brilliant enough to leave one wondering why you feel the need to use the "F***" word when your writings are so colorful with descriptions.
Would you care to elaborate on your findings of " Interesting" as I am very curious.
You seem to be a very intelligent man; one deep in thought at times. Please indulge me with your thoughts of my opinions of your poem titled "No Name"
Same Author As Above
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